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Review of One for Sorrow


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Rikki-oko

6.10.03

Final Chapters

I had a little free time and intended to catch up on a couple of chapters. Instead, I ended up reading the entire rest of this story. It was phenomenal and I already started the first chapter of Two for a Girl. The plot twist with Willow was intense, and I was incredibly impressed with your ability to make me care about Riley and Sam. I loathe these characters normally, but you have a knack for developing my interest in any character. An impressive talent. Beautiful. Heart wrenching. Unique. Tender. This story is so many things. I loved it. Can't wait to read more.

Rikki-oko

18.9.03

Chapter 23

Still plugging away on this fantastic story. This chapter is particularly teriffic. I was moved to tears by Spike's reaction to that kiss. Your portrayal of his thoughts is intense and stirring. Very well written. This was the clencher for me. Hell of a paragraph. "I throw myself on my bed, desperate to sleep before the tears start. Of course, I fail. It's what I do. I fail."

Rikki-oki

3.9.03

 

I am reading the entire Magpie Series (Which thus far is fascinating!) and I just had to stop to tell you how powerful I thought this set of lines was: "It left me comparing everyone with, not him, but my memories of him. And no one could compare to that. Not even Angel could compare with that." This is probably the best Buffy viewpoint of the Angel/Buffy dynamic I have ever seen in a fic. Really tremendous and realistic. Most fics either deny the intensity or act like it just vanished....this is real, believable closure. It's fantastic!

Terri

All Chapters
I have enjoyed "Sorrow" very much, and I like the way you use each person's "voice" to tell the story. While Xander still irritates me, it's more of a muted irritation, and not so sharp. You have characterized him extremely well. I'm glad you cleared up the egg controversy, because I never believed Spike had anything to do with that

Laura
Keep up the great work; I can't wait to see what else you have in store for the Scoobies.

Jay
I really, really enjoyed it. The plot, the characters, everything. It's one of the better fanfics I've read in a long, long time. I just thought you'd like to know that.

Laura
Hi-just a quick note to tell you how much I'm enjoying your fic. I'm liking season 7 so far, but your story is just as compelling. I also love that you've been updating so quickly-yeah instant gratification!!